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		<title>Storymoja Blog &amp; Kenyan Conversations 5 &amp; 6</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[People keep asking me how I handle writer's block. I tell them I don't. Because I never get writer's block. I get a massive wall standing between me and that article that's supposed to be at the editor's desk first thing in the morning.]]></description>
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<p>People keep asking me how I handle writer&#8217;s block. I tell them I don&#8217;t. Because I never get writer&#8217;s block. I get a massive wall standing between me and that article that&#8217;s supposed to be at the editor&#8217;s desk first thing in the morning.</p>
<p>Now I am afraid of heights, so scaling a wall is quite a feat. But when I was in my teens, my brother kept telling me that there is no other way to beat your fears, except facing them head on. That would explain the two or three times we jumped off the cliff at the Mtwana Cove, into sea water that was murky with sea weed. The first time I nearly drowned.</p>
<p>No, I am not saying that you should go jump off a high rise building to beat your writer&#8217;s block. But the plain truth is, writer&#8217;s block does not indicate an empty creative reservoir. It only means that fear is holding your creative energy hostage; fear that your article/novel/book will not be good enough for your readers, that that bitchy editor won&#8217;t like it and will send you back to the writing board (insert other fear related to writing here).</p>
<p>So how to beat that fear. Again, don&#8217;t jump off high points unless you really like the thrill, and have a parachute or glider. Even then, get some lessons first. In the meantime, try this:</p>
<p>1. Take a walk. Move away from your writing for a while. Sitting in that chair all night will not help. Trust me, I know. I&#8217;ve had a few of those nights myself. Yes. DEADLINE!!! But sitting there writing one letter every hour won&#8217;t help you get past the wall.</p>
<p>2. Read. Find books with topics close to the one you are writing about. You know how you get so excited about a new release, so you out and buy it, then come home and find it is so not what you expected. Take that book, try seeing what you would have done different had you been a writer. If it helps, put on a pair of glasses just like the one your editor looks over at you in that haughty, &#8216;I am so much better than you&#8217; way.</p>
<p>3. Ask for help. Call a friend, not neccesarily a writing buddy, just someone intelligent who does not have a grudge against you. Bounce ideas of them. Listen to what they say. It helps when you look at things from someone else&#8217;s perspective. And have fun while you are at it.</p>
<p>4. Try re-reading your work. That is, if you had actually written something and gotten stuck in the middle. If not, skip this part. Looking at your work in new light gives you a chance to re-think the direction you are taking. Don&#8217;t let the fear of re-writing stop you. After all, as a writer, you always want your work to reflect excellence all the time. So give it that time.</p>
<p>5. Lighten up. I know, number 4 probably didn&#8217;t work and it sent you right down to murky sea water levels. So get some comic relief. Watch a funny movie, or sitcom. Read a funny book. Anything to raise your spirits so can go on to number 6 below.</p>
<p>6. Use your imagination. Put your pen down, shut off your computer. Lean back in that chair. Close your eyes and visualise those scenes. If you are not the type that has a developed daydream ability, trust me, writing will always be tough. So let your &#8216;imagination&#8217; run wild for a few minutes.</p>
<p>7. Write another section of the story/article. I always partition my writing into parts. It helps me see the whole picture. I even have this board, where I put the sections up, and then try to synchronise them in mind and on paper. Sometimes, when I am stuck in one scene, I go ahead and write a scene that is far ahead. I find that is a great way to stimulate those creative juices. Of course, you must go back and double check on continuity. Otherwise, a character you killed off in section 5 might walk in when you are in section 12.</p>
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<div>8. In line with no 7, Work your Outline. If you are like many writers, you have probably already made your outline or sketch of the entire story. Looking at it again or tweaking it can spark your creativity again. I once went back to my writing and reviewed some of the things that I still needed to write about and began to work towards them. It got me over the wall and made me take several of the big steps I needed to take to move the plot along.</div>
<p>9. Plan things: Let&#8217;s say for example, one of the scenes in your story involves a funeral, where the real killer shows up, and reveals something that leads the police to arrest him. Plan that funeral. Planning helps you to create realistic scenes. As you plan, you will likely be able to see exactly which point the revelation should come. Planning also helps you to make those scenes as realistic as possible. Better still it unleashes your creative juice, that adrenaline you need to scale that wall.</p>
<p>10. I know, I know, this is the number one tip for writer&#8217;s block, but IT WORKS! Sitting down and writing SOMETHING can really get the juices pumping and get you ready to move on. So sit down and start writing.</p>
<p>Now that we have painted the wall a nice soothing colour, let us turn to the Kenyan Conversations.</p>
<p>The Stories below were entered into the <strong>Storymoja/Generation Kenya – Kenyan Conversations Contest</strong> last week. Please read them, and vote on them to choose the story that will be entered into the Kenyan Conversations Final Judging Round.</p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/shall-you-pay-for-your-imminent-freedom-by-chiira-maina/"><strong>Imminent Freedom by Chiira Maina</strong></a><strong>: </strong>“Well, the ball is now in your court,” Joseph shrugged and was about to turn when he decided that a last attempt at making his cousin change mind would not hurt at all.</p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/the-mysterious-visitor-by-beth-nduta/"><strong>The Mysterious Visitor by Beth Nduta</strong></a>: The previous night everything was normal and no one had even the slightest idea that such a hideous event could take place. I remember we were at home slowly taking our breakfast when the sirens of the police car and ambulance shattered the peaceful atmosphere.</p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/the-monster-by-beatrice-wainaina/"><strong>The Monster by Beatrice Wainaina</strong></a><strong>:</strong> My room stinks. It reeks of my mistakes. I should not have left her. My husband is a monster . . . was I mean? I came home from the dairy to find him on her. He was ploughing her like a farmer would the earth in dry season; hard and with determination. She was five.</p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/the-gentleman%E2%80%99s-club-by-clifton-anthony-gashagua/"><strong>The Gentleman&#8217;s Club by Clifton Anthony Gashagua</strong></a><strong>:</strong> They come here everyday like stray dogs leaving the comfort of their kennels at home to play in the cul-de-sac. Tole is the oldest. A retired soldier with a mind like an imaginarium, he claims to have met Queen Victoria and fought in the East African Campaign against von Lettow-Vorbeck’s forces.</p>
<p>Remember, when you see the photos up, you can comment on the blog under the picture on the Storymoja Blog orSend in a story or dialogue that is not more than 500 words long to blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke. Clearly mark in the subject Contemporary/Kenyan Conversations (Insert Number indicated)</p>
<p>The prize details are as follows:</p>
<p>1st Prize: 2000/-, 2 Storymoja books and 1 complimentary day pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>2nd Prize: 1500/-, 1 Storymoja book, and 1 Complimentary day pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>3rd Prize: 1000/-, and 1 complimentary Day Pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>3 complimentary day passes for best comments on the pictures.</p>
<p>Be Part of the Kenyan Conversation! For more details, write to <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/juliet@storymojaafrica.co.ke">juliet@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a></p>
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		<title>Pay Attention, Serious Writer &#8211; Kenyan Conversations</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Jul 2010 16:11:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You are done with your novel. You are excited, and anticipate seeing your book in print. After all the hard work, you just can’t wait!]]></description>
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<p>You are done with your novel. You are excited, and anticipate seeing your book in print. After all the hard work, you just can’t wait!</p>
<p>So where should you submit your novel, the work of your hands, this creation that you sweated blood over? Go through the list of publishers&#8230; Hm, Storymoja looks like a good bet. Send in the novel. No, your work is a short story for a magazine or an annual anthology? Send it in to your magazine or publisher of choice! You should be published by next month, right?</p>
<p>Whoa. Hold up. If you are a serious writer, it’s time to sit up and pay attention: editors will not read your work if you have not followed the guidelines. There is no, &#8220;the rules don&#8217;t apply to me.&#8221;</p>
<p>Small publications average 300 + pieces of mail a week. Larger publications can sometimes reach into the thousands. Editors simply don&#8217;t have time to think twice about your work if you have not bothered to follow guidelines they so carefully set up.</p>
<p>The first thing an editor will look at is word count - if you have even bothered to include it. Anyone who has been at this a long time can tell immediately by weight whether it&#8217;s too long or not, so dodging or omitting the word count will not earn you friends. It will certainly influence editors, just not the way you wanted.</p>
<p>If you&#8217;ve managed to keep within their word count, they will then look at the manuscript. If it is single-spaced or handwritten, that&#8217;s as far as you&#8217;ll ever get. It goes immediately into the slush pile to receive the standard, &#8220;Not for us&#8221; form letter or email.</p>
<p>Thank goodness. You&#8217;ve passed both of those. The editor will then proceed to read your work. If you have ignored the publisher’s guidelines, your baby is going out. Oh yeah, the dreaded rejection letter.</p>
<p>Example: Your work is a cozy mystery but the magazine you send it to prints only hardboiled crime fiction. Or it is asci-fi thriller and you sent to a publisher that publishes fantasies. This one is quite a common &#8211; your short story contains graphic sexual and violent content, and you send it to a family magazine.</p>
<p>All of the above applies to contests as well. Guidelines get ignored; writer is disqualified. If you are a serious writer, and you want to see your work in print, then don&#8217;t ignore a magazine or publishing house’s guidelines. Editors look at it this way: you&#8217;re not serious about following guidelines, you are playing at being a writer and there are hundreds of manuscripts by serious writers who pay attention and do it right waiting in the mailbox on a daily basis. Those writers will get the publication that should have been yours had you simply followed the rules.</p>
<p>Stop spinning your wheels and wasting editors’ time (not to mention your own) and follow the guidelines to the smallest detail. When you do that, you can rest assured the editor will read your submission and your acceptance letters may surpass your rejection letters. That is unless you are aiming at getting Guinness book record rejections.</p>
<p>The Stories below were entered into the<span style="color: #ff00ff;"> </span><strong><span style="color: #ff00ff;">Storymoj</span><span style="color: #ff00ff;">a</span>/<span style="color: #00ff00;">Generation</span> <span style="color: #ff0000;">Kenya</span> – Kenyan Conversations </strong>Contest last week. Please read them, and vote on them to choose the story that will be entered into the Kenyan Conversations Final Judging Round.</p>
<blockquote><p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/feelers-by-mwangi-ichungwa/"><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>Feelers by Mwangi Ichungwa</strong></span></a><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>:</strong> After crushing the large cockroach underfoot, he stepped outside his shack to take a gander at the evening light, radiance he could not get inside his smoky, dingy dwelling and looked&#8230;</span></p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/if-the-wind-could-tell-by-elizabeth-ombati/"><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>If the Wind could Tell by Elizabeth Ombati</strong></span></a><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>:</strong> Shhh; don’t answer darling. Such a nuisance Mama Nyaguthii is. She doesn’t know you go to school? By the way, how is Form 1?</span></p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/carlos-the-jackal-by-chrispus-kimaru/"><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>Carlos the Jackal</strong></span></a><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>:</strong> The advert had asked for energetic, graduates to serve as messengers. Having tarmacked unsuccessfully, he had applied and funny enough, was called for an interview and clinched the job.</span></p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/learning-by-claire-githu/"><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>Learning by Claire Githu</strong></span></a><span style="color: #993366;">: I should be in class. I should be out there trying to grab the world by the balls. Try to better myself. Be better than these conniving leeches who thrive on the sweat of their&#8230;</span></p>
<p><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/the-suicide-note-by-julius-muriungi/"><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>Suicide Note by Julius Muriungi</strong></span></a><span style="color: #993366;"><strong>:</strong> He had met her three years back when she was sweet sixteen, and with a few nice shoes and niceties he had won her cheap love. With his tender care she blossomed into a beaut&#8230;</span></p></blockquote>
<p>Remember, when you see the photos up, you can comment on the blog under the picture on the Storymoja Blog orSend in a story or dialogue that is not more than 500 words long to blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke. Clearly mark in the subject Contemporary/Kenyan Conversations (Insert Number indicated)</p>
<p>The prize details are as follows:</p>
<p>1st Prize: 2000/-, 2 Storymoja books and 1 complimentary day pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>2nd Prize: 1500/-, 1 Storymoja book, and 1 Complimentary day pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>3rd Prize: 1000/-, and 1 complimentary Day Pass to the Storymoja Hay Festival</p>
<p>3 complimentary day passes for best comments on the pictures.</p>
<p>Be Part of the Kenyan Conversation! For more details, write to <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/juliet@storymojaafrica.co.ke">juliet@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a></p>
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		<title>Storymoja Blog &#8211; Writing Conversations</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jul 2010 23:16:43 +0000</pubDate>
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<div id="_mcePaste">The following tips are borrowed from <strong><a href="http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/crafttechnique/tp/dialogue.htm">About.com</a></strong>. I have just mentioned the points in brief so be sure to go online and read up on the tips to great dialogues.</div>
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<div>Writing dialogue &#8212; realistic dialogue, anyway &#8212; does not come easily to everyone. Done well, dialogue advances the story and fleshes out the characters while providing a break from straight exposition.</div>
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<div id="_mcePaste">However, just as realistic dialogue is one of the most powerful tools at a writer&#8217;s disposal, nothing pulls the reader out of a story faster than bad dialogue. It takes time to develop a good ear, but noting these simple rules and obvious pitfalls can make a huge difference.</div>
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<div id="_mcePaste"><strong>1. Listen to How People Talk</strong>: Having a sense of natural speech patterns is essential to good dialogue. Start to pay attention to the expressions that people use and the music of everyday conversation.</div>
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<div><strong>2. Not Exactly like Real Speech:</strong> A transcription of a conversation would be completely boring to read. Edit out the filler words and unessential dialogue &#8212; that is, the dialogue that doesn&#8217;t contribute to the plot in some way.</div>
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<div><strong>3. Don&#8217;t Provide Too Much Info at Once:</strong> It should not be obvious to the reader that they&#8217;re being fed important facts. Let the story unfold naturally.</div>
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<div><strong>4. Break Up Dialogue with Action:</strong> Remind your reader that your characters are physical human beings by grounding their dialogue in the physical world.</div>
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<div><strong>5. Don&#8217;t Overdo Dialogue Tags:</strong> Veering too much beyond &#8220;he said/she said&#8221; only draws attention to the tags &#8212; and you want the reader&#8217;s attention centered on your brilliant dialogue, not your ability to think of synonyms for &#8220;said.&#8221;</div>
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<div><strong>6. Stereotypes, Profanity, and Slang:</strong> Be aware of falling back on stereotypes, and use profanity and slang sparingly. All of these risk distracting or alienating your reader.</div>
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<div><strong>7. Read Widely:</strong> Pay attention to why things work or don&#8217;t work. Where are you taken out of the story&#8217;s action? Where did you stop believing in a character?</div>
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<div><strong>8. Punctuate Dialogue Correctly:</strong> The rules for punctuating dialogue can be confusing: many writers need help getting them right in the beginning. Take some time to learn the basics.</div>
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<div>Speaking of conversations, <strong>The Kenyan Conversations Writing Contest</strong> is still on. As you may have noticed there is quite a bit of dialogue going on in the comments section under the photographs we posted last week.</div>
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<div>Here are the stories/dialogues that have been accepted into the contest. The stories/dialogues will be published with the photos on which they are based. <strong>Please comment on the pieces, encourage and advice the author, and vote using our Storymoja Scale described under the pieces.</strong></div>
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<div>1.<strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/illicit-by-alex-mutua/"> Illicict by Alex Mutua:</a></strong> <em>Me.  Luke Markarius. Add you more money! The budget doesn’t even recognize small time traders, Njogu.</em></div>
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<div>2. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/liquidation-by-christine-yienya/">Liquidation by Christine Yienya</a></strong>:  &#8221;You and I are the owners of this yard; we just pick one container put the <em>debes</em> in, lock it and keep the keys. Then after one week&#8230;..&#8217;</div>
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<div>3. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/not-easily-broken-by-nyawira-njenga/">Not Easily Broken by Nyawira Njenga</a></strong>: I had heard of the sad news at my charcoal stall in the market. Nantondo, the village chief rumour monger had filled me in.</div>
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<div>4. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/no-more-shallow-graves-by-julius-muriungi/">No More Shallow Graves by Julius Muriungi</a></strong>: On the other end, inside Snit-Tam transport company offices in industrial area, a heavily built man sat before a laptop with a mug of coffee in his left hand</div>
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<div>5.<strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/kenyan-conversations/storm-is-coming%E2%80%A6-by-eddy-ngeta/"> Storm is Coming by Eddy Ngeta</a></strong>: Heavy gusts of wind sweep over the abandoned container depot hurling dust and sundry debris into the faces of the two men seated on an old, oil-plastered workman’s bench&#8230;</div>
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<div>Although we will not be accepting any more story/dialogues based on the photos posted on <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/1.jpg?w=547&amp;h=365">Tuesday 6th July</a></strong> and <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/2.jpg?w=518&amp;h=365">Thursday 8th July</a></strong>, you can still comment on the photographs and stand the chance to win Kshs 2000/-, Storymoja Books and tickets to the Storymoja Hay Festival coming up soon. Be on the lookout for the photographs that will go online this week, comment on them<em> and </em>send in your story dialogues to participate in the contest.</div>
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<div>We reiterate the contest rules below:</div>
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<span style="font-family:Verdana, Tahoma, Arial, sans-serif;line-height:normal;font-size:11px;color:#2a2a2a;"> </span></p>
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<p style="line-height:1.5em;margin:0 0 15px;padding:0;">Twice a week, on Tuesday and on Thursday, we will post a photograph on the <strong><span style="color:#ff00ff;">Storymoja Blog </span></strong>(<a style="font-weight:bold;text-decoration:none;color:#d964bf;" href="http://www.storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/"><strong>www.storymojaafrica.wordpress.com</strong></a>) and on <strong><span style="color:#00ff00;">Generation</span></strong><strong> </strong><strong><span style="color:#ff0000;">Kenya</span> </strong>(<strong><a style="font-weight:bold;text-decoration:none;color:#d964bf;" href="http://generationkenya.co.ke/main/">www.</a><a style="font-weight:bold;text-decoration:none;color:#d964bf;" href="http://generationkenya.co.ke/main/">generationkenya.co.ke</a></strong>) website. These photographs will be of Kenyan People, in Kenyan Scenes, talking about Kenya.</p>
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<p style="line-height:1.5em;margin:0 0 15px;padding:0;">You can do two things:</p>
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<li><strong>Comment</strong> on the picture, tell us what you think is going on in the picture, what the people in the photographs might be talking about. Keep it brief, and <strong>come back</strong> to see what others have said. If you find an issue that you care about has been brought up, please comment, and stay to <strong>have a conversation</strong>.</li>
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<li>Send us a <strong>story or dialogue </strong>based on the photograph.  Your story or dialogue, if chosen will be published on the Storymoja Blog as part of a combined <strong>Contemporary Kenya/Kenyan Conversations</strong> Campaign. Weekly winners will be announced every Friday.</li>
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<p style="line-height:1.5em;margin:0 0 15px;padding:0;"><strong>Guidelines for Participation:</strong></p>
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<li>Comment on the blog under the picture <strong>on the Storymoja Blog</strong>.</li>
<li>Send in a story or dialogue that is <strong>not more than 500 words</strong> long.</li>
<li>Send in your story or dialogue to <a style="font-weight:bold;text-decoration:none;color:#d964bf;" href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke">blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a>. Clearly mark in the subject <strong>Contemporary/Kenyan Conversations (<span style="color:#ff0000;">include the number indicated on the photos</span>).</strong></li>
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<div>Have a wonderful week!</div>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Jul 2010 09:15:11 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>For a long time, bad things happened in Kenya, because we, Kenyans, did not talk about them, and when we dared to, we did it in hushed tones behind doors. But things have changed. Now we can talk, perhaps too much, about the wrong things, or a lot of times about the right things in the wrong way. And perhaps, that is one reason why things still go wrong in our great country.</p>
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<p><strong><span style="color: #ff00ff;">Storymoja</span></strong> and <strong><span style="color: #00ff00;">Generation</span></strong><strong> </strong><strong><span style="color: #ff0000;">Kenya</span></strong> have come together to run an experiment on conversations. And we need your help.</p>
<p>Twice a week, on Tuesday and on Thursday, we will post a photograph on the<span style="color: #ff00ff;"> </span><strong><span style="color: #ff00ff;">Storymoja Blog</span> </strong>(<a href="http://www.storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/"><strong>www.storymojaafrica.wordpress.com</strong></a>) and on <strong><span style="color: #00ff00;">Generation</span></strong><strong> </strong><strong><span style="color: #ff0000;">Kenya</span> </strong>(<strong><a href="http://generationkenya.co.ke/main/">www.</a><a href="http://generationkenya.co.ke/main/">generationkenya.co.ke</a></strong>) website. These photographs will be of Kenyan People, in Kenyan Scenes, talking about Kenya.</p>
<p>You can do two things:</p>
<ol>
<li><strong>Comment</strong> on the picture, tell us what you think is going on in the picture, what the people in the photographs might be talking about. Keep it brief, and <strong>come back</strong> to see what others have said. If you find an issue that you care about has been brought up, please comment, and stay to <strong>have a conversation</strong>.</li>
</ol>
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<li>Send us a <strong>story or dialogue </strong>based on the photograph.  Your story or dialogue, if chosen will be published on the Storymoja Blog as part of a combined <strong>Contemporary Kenya/Kenyan Conversations</strong> Campaign. Weekly winners will be announced every Friday.</li>
</ol>
<p><strong>Guidelines for Participation:</strong></p>
<ol>
<li>Comment on the blog under the picture <strong>on the Storymoja Blog</strong>.</li>
<li>Send in a story or dialogue that is <strong>not more than 500 words </strong>long.</li>
<li>Send in your story or dialogue to <a href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke">blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a>. Clearly mark in the subject<strong>Contemporary/Kenyan Conversations.</strong></li>
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<p>If you comment, or send in a story/dialogue, you stand the chance to win <strong>fabulous cash prizes, books, and tickets</strong> to the Storymoja Hay Festival Coming up soon.</p>
<p>So get started as soon as you see the photographs. Tuzungumze sasa!</p>
<p>In the meantime, here are this week’s Contemporary Kenya stories.</p>
<p>We begin with Alex Mutua’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/the-heir-by-alex-mutua/">The Heir</a></strong>: <em>Eve looked at the gun on the table, and the rosary 20 millimeters from her mom’s mouth, the hole on the wall the size of a Volkswagen beetle head light and the slamming door then back to her fright&#8230;</em></p>
<p>Then we have Chrispus Kimaru’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/a-freshlyground-professor-by-clifton-gachagua-antony/">A FreshlyGround Proffesor</a></strong>: <em>The students are all in their seatts by the time you get to the lecture hall. She sits at the back with earphones on. Her carefree hair a wild maroon; her sickly eyes lost in the expensive glasses&#8230;</em></p>
<p>We close this week’s reading with P. Ochieng’ Ochieng’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/juliana-by-p-ochieng-ochieng/">Juliana</a></strong>: <em>Juliana pictured the tall beak-nosed mother superior hurriedly making the sign of the cross; the pain and sorrow of realization clouding here azure eyes.</em></p>
<p>Here’s to a great week and even better Kenyan Conversations!</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2010 08:25:07 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>Most ‘grown-ups’ I know, scoff when they hear younger people talk about Facebook. I know someone who says ‘Twitter is for twits’. Well, no matter how deep your disdain for social media platforms, you need to know some basic facts about social media platforms.</p>
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<li>A large part of any writer’s demographic audience ‘lives’ on social media platforms.</li>
<li>If you write for a living and not just for pleasure, you need to sell your work and social media can help you to do that.</li>
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<p>That said, how can you use social media properly to sell your work, and still maintain a measure of privacy and dignity?</p>
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<p>Facebook, LinkedIn, and Twitter allow an individual or business to set up a profile. Think of each profile as a mini-website. These services provide tools that allow you to limit who sees your information (called privacy controls), who may contact you, how they contact you, and how much information you share. The biggest challenge for newcomers is that you must define your purpose for the site to be effective.</p>
<p><strong>Facebook: </strong>Facebook is a hybrid of personal and business users with over 300 million users. According to Alexa.com, it&#8217;s the third most trafficked site in the world. It&#8217;s also the number one social network (Nielson.com). If you want exposure, you can get it here. Set up a basic account and a great profile, at the very least.</p>
<p>The demographic is primarily 35 years old and people now spend three times more on Facebook than on Google (Jayde 2009). That&#8217;s a lot of market potential, and it&#8217;s an international market! I bet those folks with $100,000 annual incomes can afford to hire a writer to help with their memoirs, newsletters, and resumes.</p>
<p>This website appeals more to professional and mature audiences, partially because the format is cleaner and easier to navigate. It&#8217;s designed to allow people to communicate through messages, posting to the wall &#8212; which is like a bulletin board &#8212; sharing photos, news, blogs, and more. There are also fun features, like sending flowers or hugs, to customers, friends, and family.</p>
<p>Business users also add personal touches to their sites. They use logos showing charities the business supports, company picnic photos, and good PR news. It&#8217;s very important to check the privacy settings carefully though. You&#8217;ll quickly annoy friends and family if you send every update to the entire list. It&#8217;s also not a good idea to send your boss a note that says you sent flowers to your girlfriend or applied for another job. These risks are good reasons not to mix business and personal use.</p>
<h3>LinkedIn: <span style="font-weight: normal; font-size: 13px;">This is the most respected and widely used site for business networking. LinkedIn is where you share ideas and get answers to questions from professionals that you&#8217;d never meet any other way. Industry specific professional groups help each other through advice, resources, referrals, and more. Plus, employers post jobs and recruit here.</span></h3>
<p>LinkedIn isn&#8217;t a fast-track to becoming an executive editor at Random House, but it is good exposure that can be focused on your specialty. People get to know you through discussions. They learn about you and your expertise when you answer questions for others by responding to a discussion. Again, it&#8217;s about others and earning the respect of others in your network who can make referrals.</p>
<p>In addition, customers and employers can post public recommendations on your page, and you can see when people in your network change jobs or location, which helps you maintain a current network with viable contacts. Your network can be as wide or narrow as you want to work to make it.</p>
<h3>Twitter: <span style="font-weight: normal; font-size: 13px;">Twitter is a micro-blogging site, and it grew by 1,928% from June 2008 to June 2009 (Nielson.com). It is now the fastest growing social network in the world.</span></h3>
<p>The purpose is to create awareness of your presence. Messages should provide helpful tips, entertain, or inform your target market. Yes, there are spammers and hookers here too. It&#8217;s easy to block the undesirable element though. The big no-no is blatant self-promotion. Like all customer-oriented content, it&#8217;s about them, not you.</p>
<p>You build a following by offering information that people want, solving problems, and engaging in useful conversation. There is an amazing amount of good research information available by doing simple searches too.</p>
<p>It’s up to you to decide how much or how little you will use social media platforms. As you decide, let’s go and read this week’s Contemporary Nairobi Stories. Two of them are continuations from last week, but must still be voted on as individual stories. See <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/second-chance-dad-part-2-by-moraa-gitaa/">Second Chance Dad 2</a> and <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/to-the-t-part-2-by-jaimin-s-vyas/">To the T 2.</a></p>
<p>Then we have Mwangi Ichungwa with <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/the-classifieds-by-mwangi-ichungwa/">The Classifieds</a>: Dear Isaiah, As you may have noticed, you have been recorded enjoying our most delectable services. We would like to take this moment to assure you that only you have a copy of this footage.</p>
<p>Lastly we have Chrispus Kimaru with <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/jesus-says-by-chrispus-kimaru/">Jesus Says&#8230;:</a> “Kijana, I don’t care where you work or what jet fuel you drink, my house my terms or else you will find that mattress of yours on the stairs!” his words were stinging as he intended.</p>
<p>You have a chance to be the next week’s author of the Contemporary Nairobi Story of the Week. The Contest will continue until the end of July.</p>
<p>Every author who wins the Story of the Week, will have the opportunity to have their work in expedited review at the Storymoja Editorial Review Table. To win that spot, please send in a story that fits into the categories below.</p>
<p>-         Contemporary Nairobi setting</p>
<p>-         Has two or more young professionals as main characters</p>
<p>-         Can be either Crime/Detective Fiction, Romance or Life Crisis Fiction</p>
<p>-         Must be complete enough to stand as a story by itself</p>
<p>-         Has a running mystery; story must be short but the mystery should make it possible to develop the story into a novella (10000 words)</p>
<p>-         Should not be more than 2000 words</p>
<p>In addition to the expedited review, the winning author will have a Writer Profile on our site, as well as stand a chance to win KES 500 and one of the <a href="http://go2.wordpress.com/?id=725X1342&amp;site=storymojaafrica.wordpress.com&amp;url=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.co.ke%2Fmain%2Fstorymoja-books%2F&amp;sref=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.wordpress.com%2F2010%2F01%2F04%2Fall-time-favorite-story-and-writer-of-2009%2F">Storymoja titles</a>.</p>
<p>May the best writer win!</p>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 20:05:38 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>Like many of you, I was raised on the Famous Five, Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys. I went through an Agatha Christie and Sir Arthur Conan Doyle Phase.</p>
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<p>I have now graduated to Patricia Cornwell’s medical examiner detective series, Kathy Reich’s forensic anthropology series, and some of Ruth Rendell’s tragic detective stories. I am a die-hard mystery junkie.</p>
<p>Mystery junkies seek a particular experience: they want the intellectual challenge of solving the crime before the detective does, and the pleasure of knowing that everything will come together in the end. Which is why it is so much harder and so much easier at the same time to follow the standard rules of writing mystery. Of course, the best way of testing the mystery writing rules that follow is to read widely in the genre. See how others use them or how and when they get away with breaking them.</p>
<p>Do you want to know the rules?</p>
<p>I oblige. But of course, you will have to dig harder to find out more about the rules.</p>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>1. In mystery writing, plot is everything.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>2. Introduce both the detective and the culprit early on.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>3. Introduce the crime within the first three chapters of your mystery novel.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>4. The crime should be sufficiently violent &#8212; preferably a murder.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>5. The crime should be believable.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>6. The detective should solve the case using only rational and scientific methods.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>7. The culprit must be capable of committing the crime.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>8. In mystery writing, don&#8217;t try to fool your reader.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>9. Do your research.</em></div>
<div id="_mcePaste"><em>10. Wait as long as possible to reveal the culprit.</em></div>
<p>And now let’s get back to the Contemporary Nairobi Writing Challenge. The terms remain the same<strong>. </strong>Every author who wins the Story of the Week, will have the opportunity to have their work in expedited review at the Storymoja Editorial Review Table. To win that spot,<strong> </strong><strong>please send in a story</strong> that fits into the categories below.</p>
<p>-         Contemporary Nairobi setting</p>
<p>-         Has two or more young <em>professionals</em> as main characters</p>
<p>-         Can be either Crime/Detective Fiction, Romance or Life Crisis Fiction</p>
<p>-         Must be complete enough to stand as a story by itself</p>
<p>-         Has a running mystery; story must be short but the mystery should make it possible to develop the story into a novella (10000 words)</p>
<p>-         Should not be more than 2000 words</p>
<p>In addition to the expedited review, the winning author will have a Writer Profile on our site, as well as stand a chance to win KES 500 and one of the <strong><a href="http://go2.wordpress.com/?id=725X1342&amp;site=storymojaafrica.wordpress.com&amp;url=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.co.ke%2Fmain%2Fstorymoja-books%2F&amp;sref=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.wordpress.com%2F2010%2F01%2F04%2Fall-time-favorite-story-and-writer-of-2009%2F">Storymoja titles</a></strong>.</p>
<p>So who has taken up the challenge this week?</p>
<p><strong>Jaimin Vyas</strong> with <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/to-the-t-by-jaimin-s-vyas/">To a T</a></strong>: <em>I want you to listen to me. You have been a failure all your life. You will continue to be a failure. I will not be a part of that failure. So I am going to make you a deal. I want you to split that 200,000 dollars&#8230;</em></p>
<p><strong>Moraa Gitaa</strong> with <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/second-chance-dad-by-moraa-gitaa/">Second Chance Dad</a></strong>: <em>What the hell was I supposed to do?! I return home unexpectedly from a writer’s workshop and find you in bed with another woman. A month later she’s pregnant.</em><em> </em><em>Carrying my husband’s baby&#8230;</em><em> </em></p>
<p><strong>Chrispus Kimaru</strong> with <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/inside-a-swinging-rope-by-chrispus-kimaru/">Inside a Swinging Rope</a></strong>: <em>You are lucky you have your mum, my husband died two weeks after we discovered all our savings and our land’s title deed were gone. I know everyone blames me, even the other families in the slum look at me&#8230;</em></p>
<p><strong>Naomi Kamau</strong> with <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/if-who-you-are-is-what-you-have-by-naomi-kamau/">If who you are is what you have&#8230;</a></strong>: <em>I am Raymond Rukata the new occupant of House NO. 5 in village flats near Delamere farm in Naivasha. I moved in two months ago after losing my job as an accountant at Pang Pang Motor garage in Nakuru.</em></p>
<p>And finally, <strong>Nyasili Atetwe</strong> with <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/adding-holes-to-my-belt-by-nyasili-atetwe/">Adding Holes to my Belt</a></strong>:<em> </em><em>He yawned, rubbed his face with his hand as if to refresh himself and then leaned on the table with his elbow; a smile, wildly inscrutable lighted up his face. Julia wondered if the smile meant her well&#8230;</em></p>
<p>May the best writer win!</p>
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		<title>Storymoja Blog- What is in a Setting?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jun 2010 05:30:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[In one of my favourite’s To Build a Fire by Jack London the story takes place on a trail in the Yukon. This setting is vital to the story because nature, the cold and the snow become the main character’s worst enemy. ]]></description>
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<p>Setting is the psychological time or place in a story. Setting plays an important role in the success of stories.</p>
<div id="attachment_2376" class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 203px"><a href="http://storymojaafrica.co.ke/main/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Fire.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-2376" title="Fire" src="http://storymojaafrica.co.ke/main/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Fire.jpg" alt="" width="193" height="273" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Although his fingers were quite numb...</p></div>
<p>In one of my favourite’s <span style="text-decoration: underline;">To Build a Fire by Jack London </span>the story takes place on a trail in the Yukon. This setting is vital to the story because nature, the cold and the snow become the main character’s worst enemy. Nature is flatly indifferent to mankind’s survival. The cold will not change because of man nor does it care about human existence. The temperature in this story is set at a frigid seventy-five degrees below zero.</p>
<p>The main character is a man who is walking a trail by himself trying to make it to a camp where other men are staying. He was warned not to go out into the cold, especially alone, if it is fifty degrees below zero or more. The man is ignorant to reality. His only companion is a dog who is almost smarter than the man. The dog knows what he must do to survive and is the only one who succeeds. The man has to build a fire in order to dry his boot that had gotten wet. The last fire that the man builds is what kills him. The fire is put out by snow that has fallen down from a pine tree branch. The man freezes to death. He dies with dignity.</p>
<p>Setting is very important to this story, without it, the reader would not learn of the common ignorant human behaviour when it comes to survival in an indifferent environment. The setting of this story does not regard the man as important and is unconcerned with his suffering and death. Mankind can not control nature and our survival in it. We can heed warnings though and not chance our survival in horrible natural weather conditions.</p>
<p>Now let’s turn our attention to the <strong>Contemporary Nairobi</strong> setting.</p>
<p>What are the characteristics of the Nairobi City; climate, flora, fauna, landmark buildings, transport system, social scenes, behaviour characteristic of and dependent on the characteristics of the city? How do these aspects affect your story, your characters’ choices, the turn of the story?</p>
<p>Here’s the sketch of <em>my</em> Contemporary Nairobi story.</p>
<p>I am an editor, who lives on the outskirts of Nairobi, and work in the heart of the City. I have to commute to work everyday, 2 hours from my home town, a distance that would be covered in 37 minutes but which takes 2 hours because of the crazy morning traffic.</p>
<p>I leave my house early to get to the office on time. I get home late because the job demands a lot of me. My life is restricted to the office, and the buses. I don’t have a life outside of this.</p>
<p>Soon, I begin to recognise my early morning, late evening fellow passengers. I don’t know their names. But I know what they read, I can recognise their phones because I see them pull the gadgets out either to take calls or to listen to music.</p>
<p>I know that the guy who wears the black jacket everyday is in law-enforcement. He gets off at the stop near the CID headquarters. The cute-as-a-button petite girl who sleeps all the way to her stop is a medical student. I woke her up just yesterday when her stop came up and she was still asleep. The Lady with the dreadlocks works at the art centre. I was not sure if she was an artist, but I am beginning to think she is a graphic designer. The old guy who has a walking stick own a cyber cafe. I overheard a conversation he had with someone who is not a regular on the route. He used to work as a clerk in the ministry of information. Used the retirement ‘golden handshake’ to start a business with his daughter. His son is a little too shifty.</p>
<p>One day, I notice that the guy who wears the black jacket, and the old man with the walking stick are not on the bus. This continues for a week. I want to find out what happened to them.</p>
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<li>The wider setting is Contemporary Nairobi, but the immediate setting is the bus. How does this affect how I tell this story?</li>
<li>What extraordinary thing can happen in the bus to make me actually take the time and give the effort to find out what happens to the the two passengers?</li>
<li>How much can my investigation possibly take place within the confines of the bus?</li>
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<p>Think about it. Maybe even complete this story if you wish to.  But think about your story in these terms, too.</p>
<p>As previously announced, over the next few weeks, every author who wins the Story of the Week, will have the opportunity to have their work in expedited review at the Storymoja Editorial Review Table. To win that spot, please send in a story that fits into the categories below.</p>
<p>-         Contemporary Nairobi setting</p>
<p>-         Has two or more young <em>professionals</em> as main characters</p>
<p>-         Can be either Crime/Detective Fiction, Romance or Life Crisis Fiction</p>
<p>-         Must be complete enough to stand as a story by itself</p>
<p>-         Has a running mystery; story must be short but the mystery should make it possible to develop the story into a novella (10000 words)</p>
<p>-         Should not be more than 2000 words</p>
<p>In addition to the expedited review, the author will have a Writer Profile on our site, as well as stand a chance to win KES 500 and one of the <strong><a href="http://go2.wordpress.com/?id=725X1342&amp;site=storymojaafrica.wordpress.com&amp;url=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.co.ke%2Fmain%2Fstorymoja-books%2F&amp;sref=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.wordpress.com%2F2010%2F01%2F04%2Fall-time-favorite-story-and-writer-of-2009%2F">Storymoja titles</a></strong>.</p>
<p>Please send in your work to <strong><a href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke">blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a></strong>, and make sure that you mark clearly in the Subject line <strong>Contemporary Nairobi for Blog</strong>. Your emails will be filtered, so if you do not mark the subject line clearly, your mail may be misdirected or deleted.</p>
<p>Please make sure that you send in your story by the Friday before the week when you would like your story to be published.</p>
<p>For now, let’s see this week’s Contemporary Nairobi stories. It’s up to you to judge how well the stories are crafted, and how well the Nairobi setting is used and builds upon the story. Please make comments as well as vote on the story.</p>
<p>We begin with Twahira Abdallah’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/culture/my-child%E2%80%99s-culture-is-kenyan-twahira-abdallah/">My Child is Kenyan</a></strong>: <em>When I said I was going to raise my children not to be tribalists, all my family members supported me, as did my in-laws. They all said it was a noble cause. And how was I going to do it?</em><em> </em></p>
<p>Then we move on to Sahir Saddiq’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/kalekye-by-sahar-siddiq/">Kalekye</a></strong>: Hakuna maziwa,’<em> there is no milk, she told the </em>Askari <em>guard, when he asked for tea. ‘</em>Hakuna stima,’<em> there is no electricity she told him when he asked if he could charge his cell-phone inside.</em></p>
<p>Alex Mutua gives us <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/president%E2%80%99s-pardon-by-alex-mutua/">Presidential Pardon</a></strong>: <em>When they walked through the Mabati door of Makuti Bar they were almost naked, they stupefied the security guards, and went through uncensored. If they would be suicide bomb&#8230;</em></p>
<p>Lastly we have a continuation of Clifford C. Oluoch’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/writing/destiny-%E2%80%93-part-2-by-clifford-c-oluoch/">Destiny</a></strong><em>: A man wearing shades forced his way to the front to join Serah who moved more towards the driver. The driver took one look at the man and immediately recognized him.</em></p>
<p>Here’s wishing you all a happy reading and an excellent week!</p>
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		<title>Poetry &#8211; Wisps of Smoky Tears</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Jun 2010 07:17:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I have always admired people who can make emotions hang on a word. I have written poetry, but I am a writer of many words, and so mine is not quite the kind of poetry that brings wisps of smoky tears to my eyes. So allow me to introduce you instead to the poetry...]]></description>
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<p style="text-align: center;"><em><span style="color: #800080;">A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words. </span><a title="1875-1963, American Poet" href="http://www.famous-quotes.com/author.php?aid=2662"><span style="color: #800080;"><strong>Robert Frost</strong></span></a></em></p>
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<p>I have always admired people who can make emotions hang on a word. I have written poetry, but I am a writer of many words, and so mine is not quite the kind of poetry that brings wisps of smoky tears to my eyes.</p>
<p>So allow me to introduce you instead to the poetry that will bring out the humanity in us all.</p>
<p>Is it a good thing, to waste time? <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/poetry/a-wasted-moment/">A Wasted Moment.</a></strong></p>
<p>Transformation, Aristocracy, Music. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/poetry/daydreams/">Daydreams</a>.</strong></p>
<p>Power in equivocal benevolence. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/poetry/the-baton/">The Baton</a></strong>.</p>
<p>Modest honesty.<strong> <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/poetry/the-bear-in-the-truth/">The Bear in the Truth.</a></strong></p>
<p>Grievances. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/poetry/ak47-over-the-chemist-counter/">Ak47 over the chemist counter</a>.</strong></p>
<p>To have your poems on the monthly gallery show, please send them in to us (<a href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke"><strong>blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</strong></a> – Make sure that you mark clearly on the subject line <strong>Poetry for the Blog</strong>) every week by the last Thursday of every month. We will be looking for themed poetry that could likely be added to our performance portfolio. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.co.ke/main/category/events/cut-off-my-tongue-events/">For details see this page</a></strong>.</p>
<p>Don’t forget to send in your Contemporary Nairobi Stories. Please send in your work to <strong><a href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke">blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</a></strong>, and make sure that you mark clearly in the Subject line <strong>Contemporary Nairobi for Blog</strong>. Your emails will be filtered, so if you do not mark the subject line clearly, your mail may be misdirected or deleted. Please make sure that you send in your story by the Friday before the week when you would like your story to be published. <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/2010/05/31/time-for-a-buzz-%e2%80%93-contemporary-nairobi/">Go here for more details.</a></strong></p>
<p>Happy day-before- Friday!</p>
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		<title>Storymoja Blog &#8211; Contemporary Nairobi</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2010 05:30:55 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>I think it is time for a buzz over here. It’s mid of the year, deadlines are catching up, routine is lulling, unless you are planning a June wedding in which case you might be right out of your mind. Still no reason at all for the creative minds to go into a lull.</p>
<p>So we are changing things up!</p>
<p>It is time for a new face on the stories we see here. We have talked about nearly everything to do with writing a story, hooking your reader, making the publishers want to sell your work, blah blah blah; now it is time to see it happen.<br />
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Over the next few weeks, every author who wins the Story of the Week, will have the opportunity to have their work in expedited review at the Storymoja Editorial Review Table. To win that spot, please send in a story that fits into the categories below.</p>
<p>-         Contemporary Nairobi setting</p>
<p>-         Has two or more young professionals as main characters</p>
<p>-         Can be either Crime/Detective Fiction, Romance or Life Crisis Fiction</p>
<p>-         Must be complete enough to stand as a story by itself</p>
<p>-         Has a running mystery; story must be short but the mystery should make it possible to develop the story into a novella (10000 words)</p>
<p>-         Should not be more than 2000 words</p>
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<p>In addition to the expedited review, the author will have a Writer Profile on our site, as well as stand a chance to win KES 500 and one of the <a href="http://go2.wordpress.com/?id=725X1342&amp;site=storymojaafrica.wordpress.com&amp;url=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.co.ke%2Fmain%2Fstorymoja-books%2F&amp;sref=http%3A%2F%2Fstorymojaafrica.wordpress.com%2F2010%2F01%2F04%2Fall-time-favorite-story-and-writer-of-2009%2F"><strong>Storymoja titles</strong></a>.</p>
<p>Please send in your work to <a href="mailto:blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke"><strong>blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke</strong></a>, and make sure that you mark clearly in the Subject line <strong>Contemporary Nairobi for Blog</strong>. Your emails will be filtered, so if you do not mark the subject line clearly, your mail may be misdirected or deleted.</p>
<p>Please make sure that you send in your story by the Friday before the week when you would like your story to be published.</p>
<p>This week, our readings begin with <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/culture/destiny-by-clifford-c-oluoch/"><strong>Destiny</strong></a> by Clifford C. Oluoch: Peter removed his two phones – a blackberry and an iphone. He chose the blackberry and dialed a number. Two rings later, he was through. “Good morning angel,” he purred.</p>
<p>Alex Mutua has something to say. Kenya does have certain freedoms, and the freedom to speak, or write is one of them.<a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/one-moment-by-alex-mutua/"><strong>Moments</strong></a>: Men are frightened by women who insist on carrying their maiden name and education into their marriage. Men fall in fear.</p>
<p>We close the readings with Wainaina Kimani’s <a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/culture/mwananchi-by-wainaina-kimani/"><strong>Mwananchi</strong></a>: Shortly after the engine started coughing, I felt a cold Iron on the upper part of my neck. It was followed by a brief speech from the Iron owner.</p>
<p>At Storymoja, we believe that Kenya has very many creative writers, and we are happy to give you forum to write, to grow and to get published!</p>
<p>Have an excellent week!</p>
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		<title>Storymoja Blog &#8211; Conflict and Tension</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 14:24:52 +0000</pubDate>
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<p><strong>Conflict and Tension</strong></p>
<p><em><span style="color: #800000;">Conflict is the fundamental element of fiction, fundamental because in literature only trouble is interesting. It takes trouble to turn the great themes of life into a story: birth, love, sex, work, and death.  -Janet Burroway</span></em></p>
<p>Are you wondering why your publisher thinks your book might not sell, even though you have put in the better part of a year rewriting, re-editing and basically losing sleep over your work? Well, publishers look for material that will be appealing to readers. Readers (humans in general) are attracted to conflict and tension in a story.</p>
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<p>That’s why publishers snapped up Dan Brown’s Da Vinci Code, they could see that the story itself would hold the reader’s attention, and also generate quite a bit of controversy in the media, which is very useful publicity. That’s why the writer(s) of <em>24</em> the TV series, and many other films, TV series and so on previously mentioned here are pretty much set for life, unless, of course, drug habits and divorce settlements bring on bankruptcy <img src='http://storymojaafrica.co.ke/main/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>What’s that? Local examples? Alright? Why do you think the John Kiriamiti series were such a hit? David Mailu anyone?</p>
<p>Ah, you want contemporary. In describing the new local TV series, <strong>Changing Times</strong>, writer George Orido says: <em>Changing Times is a drama about a powerful multinational and the man behind its success. Mr Kanyi, a brilliant businessman and a loving father, has got where he is by being discerning and perceptive. But in an uncharacteristic error of judgment he gets involved with the wrong people.</em><em> </em></p>
<p>How much tension and conflict do you read in that? Well, yes, the content and production itself will decide how long the audience will hang on to it, but I believe the point is demonstrated. If you want your work to sell itself, it’s got to be good, it’s got to hold your audience, and yes, your publisher is one of them.</p>
<p>Of course, if you really don’t give a fig what the publishers think, you could always self-publish. But, that’s not the point, right now. The point is, what is <em>Conflict</em>, what is <em>Tension </em>and how do you bring them into your story?</p>
<blockquote><p>Conflict produces tension that makes the story begin. Tension is created by opposition between the character or characters and internal or external forces or conditions. By balancing the opposing forces of the conflict, you keep readers glued to the pages wondering how the story will end.</p>
<p>Possible Conflicts Include:</p>
<ul>
<li>The protagonist against another individual</li>
<li>The protagonist against nature (or technology)</li>
<li>The protagonist against society</li>
<li>The protagonist against God</li>
<li>The protagonist against himself or herself.</li>
</ul>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Conflict Checklist</span></strong></p>
<p>Mystery.  Explain just enough to tease readers. Never give everything away.</p>
<p>Empowerment.  Give both sides options.</p>
<p>Progression.  Keep intensifying the number and type of obstacles the protagonist faces.</p>
<p>Causality.  Hold fictional characters more accountable than real people. Characters who make mistakes frequently pay, and, at least in fiction, commendable folks often reap rewards.</p>
<p>Surprise.  Provide sufficient complexity to prevent readers predicting events too far in advance.</p>
<p>Empathy.  Encourage reader identification with characters and scenarios that pleasantly or (unpleasantly) resonate with their own sweet dreams (or night sweats).</p>
<p>Insight.  Reveal something about human nature.</p>
<p>Universality.  Present a struggle that most readers find meaningful, even if the details of that struggle reflect a unique place and time.</p>
<p>High Stakes.  Convince readers that the outcome matters because someone they care about could lose something precious. Trivial clashes often produce trivial fiction.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Build to a Crisis or Climax</span></strong></p>
<p>This is the turning point of the story&#8211;the most exciting or dramatic moment.</p>
<p><em>The crisis may be a recognition, a decision, or a resolution. The character understands what hasn&#8217;t been seen before, or realizes what must be done, or finally decides to do it. It&#8217;s when the worm turns. Timing is crucial. If the crisis occurs too early, readers will expect still another turning point. If it occurs too late, readers will get impatient&#8211;the character will seem rather thick. -Jerome Stern</em></p>
<p>Jane Burroway says that the crisis &#8220;must always be presented as a scene. It is <em>the moment</em> the reader has been waiting for. While a good story needs a crisis, a random event such as a car crash or a sudden illness is simply an emergency &#8211;unless it somehow involves a conflict that makes the reader care about the characters.</p>
<p><strong>Find a Resolution</strong></p>
<p>The solution to the conflict. In short fiction, it is difficult to provide a complete resolution and you often need to just show that characters are beginning to change in some way or starting to see things differently.</p>
<p>There are several ways to achieve this:</p>
<ol>
<li>Open.  Readers determine the meaning.</li>
<li>Resolved.  Clear-cut outcome.</li>
<li>Parallel to Beginning.  Similar to beginning situation or image.</li>
<li>Monologue.  Character comments.</li>
<li>Dialogue.  Characters converse.</li>
<li>Literal Image.  Setting or aspect of setting resolves the plot.</li>
<li>Symbolic Image.  Details represent a meaning beyond the literal one.</li>
</ol>
<p>Material borrowed from <strong><a href="http://jerz.setonhill.edu/writing/creative/shortstory/">Professor Dennis G. Jerz’s Weblog.</a></strong></p></blockquote>
<p>And now to this week’s readings.</p>
<p>We begin with a continuation from Oliver Mathenge’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/from-my-mother%E2%80%99s-kitchen-%E2%80%93-part-2-by-oliver-mathenge/">From my Mother’s Kitchen</a></strong>: <em>As Muchiri and Wambui rolled on the floor punching each other mercilessly, they hit one of the stools on which the kerosene lamp had been placed.</em></p>
<p>And then on to Rayhab Gachango’s <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/culture/karanja-and-the-bullies-by-rayhab-gachango/">Karanja and the Bullies</a></strong>: <em>“My name is Karanja. Hi, I come from the virange of Kirika and hi am preased to be here!”</em></p>
<p>Clifford Oluoch graces our pages this week with another Adam vs Eve Debate, this time about <strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/relationships/adam-vs-eve-lies-lies-lies-by-clifford-c-oluoch/">Lies, Lies, Lies</a></strong><em>: “You will always come first.” Coming first means after his hobbies, career, ‘the boys’ and if he is an alcohol lover &#8211; tough luck, after his drink!</em></p>
<p>We close this week’s reading with<strong><a href="http://storymojaafrica.wordpress.com/culture/merchants-and-gifts-by-osas/"> Merchants &amp; Gifts by Osas</a></strong>. <em>Reader Advisement – <strong>This article contains material that may not be acceptable to all audiences</strong>. However, if you choose to ignore it, you will be ignoring the plight of a child somewhere in Kenya.</em></p>
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<p>Have an excellent week!</p>
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