Storymoja Blog – Clear, Effective Writing

January 25th, 2010  |  Published in News, Reading

Business of writing

Business of writing

Whether you are a new writer, or a seasoned one, it is always good to find out how other writers have fared before you. The internet is an incredible resource in this regard. True, you should not take every piece of advice as the gospel truth, but neither should you limit yourself from learning as much as you can. There are very many websites out there that offer excellent advice and guidance in the business of writing. In time, every writer finds his own voice, and develops their own niche, which helps in fine tuning your inner radar to identify which advice is good for your genre and interest in writing, and which is not. So get out there and explore the world! The world wide web, I mean. And in the meantime, I would like to share one of the gems I have found over time out there.


5 Quick Tips for Clear, Effective Writing by Laurie Pawlik Kienlen


1. Ka – Pow ! Write with impact. “Readers often use the same images to describe a document that has no impact,” writes Colter in Writing to Go. “‘It’s flat.’; ‘There’s no life in it’; ‘It just lies on the page.’” To make your writing more effective, add a little ooomph to your words and sentences. How? Learn what edgy and quirky writing is, and experiment with different, active, and precise verbs and nouns.

2. Use words and phrases you understand.Take this sentence: “The scansion of your writing reveals that you can learn to write better.” Ummmm…huh?….I looked up “scansion” before and after writing this sentence, and I still don’t know what it means. I’m sure I’m not using the word correctly, and I’m equally sure that even readers who know what it means won’t understand the sentence. To write clearly and effectively, leave out the “razzle dazzle” words (even if you know what they mean).

3. Connect the dots in your writing. Do your sentences and paragraphs have clear transitions from one thought to another? For instance, I often struggle with the opening paragraphs of my “Quips and Tips” articles, which contain four main elements. I want to introduce the idea (and hook readers!), include a writing quip, feature a book about writing, and then flow into the main article. These four elements need to be connected with logical thoughts and words. When your writing is clear, it won’t feel choppy or disjointed. Effective writing flows.

4. Take out the trash – even if you’re earning a dollar a word. Established freelance writers may get paid a dollar or two per word, but they strip every unnecessary syllable from their sentences if they want to keep earning a living as a writer. Students writing 1,000 word essays may want to stuff in extra words to complete the assignment, but what they gain in time they’ll lose in grades. Clear, effective writing is about using short words like “truthfully” instead of long phrases like “as a matter of fact” (or not eliminating the words altogether, if it’s not necessary). If you want to write better, fellow scribes, you need to take out the trash.

5. Use a fine-toothed comb on your article, essay, or business proposal. Even the most successful writers cannot apply every tip for better writing in their first, second, or third drafts. To write better – and keep your readers hooked – you need to edit and revise your work several times. This means starting writing your essay or article long before it’s due…and combing out all the tangles.

Borrowed from The Adventourous Writer.


That said and done let us move into the readings for the week.


Stephen Mwangi Ichungwa is back! With High Treason: I know boys like you, Paul. You come here to buy weed. You think nothing of it. You come from the nice place where you live, to the ghetto. For you, it’s part of the thrill, going into the underbelly of Eastlands. I’m pretty sure you…

Connie Mutua is gracing our pages again. With Midnight and Pickup Trucks: Her hand wasn’t cold. There was no stiffness. Her eyes were closed ripe in the fullness of all they had ever seen. There was no pulse and still it felt like she knew something I didn’t. Her lips gently touching parted w…


Then Joseph comes in with a tale from Christmas. Ants For Christmas: Meat, meat and even more meat! Everywhere! In the kitchen, on the dining room table, in the passage between the two rooms, on the way to the mouth…


Lastly but certainly not least, the man vs woman debate, Adam vs Eve in What’s the deal with weddings?: Weddings; who needs all that stress? Why do other people have higher stakes in weddings than the bride and bridegroom? And why do men fear weddings?

Please continue sending your ideas about how to make your weekly reading more fun to blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke. And remember, all stories published on the Storymoja Blog will be eligible for the Crown of Story of the Week. The stories are posted every Monday. Please critique and vote for the story you believe should wear the crown. At the end of the week, the votes will be tallied and the story with the most votes will posted on the Storymoja Website as the Story of the Week on the Friday of the same week.


To have your story in this weekly process please send it to blogs@storymojaafrica.co.ke before Friday at 4pm.


Thank you to all of you for your continued support and have a wonderful week!



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