Comments on: MY WIFE IS A TOMBOY by Denis Kabi – Full Version

By: Eve

Eve — Wed, 11 Nov 2009 06:38:31 +0000

This story was very funny, I really enjoyed it!!

By: Eve

Eve — Wed, 11 Nov 2009 06:38:00 +0000

This story was very funny, I really enjoyed it!!

By: purity

purity — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 12:46:01 +0000

interesting how your mind works…thanks for this big banana smile.

By: purity

purity — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 12:46:00 +0000

interesting how your mind works…thanks for this big banana smile.

By: Brendah

Brendah — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 08:46:48 +0000

I love the story. I could visualize the whole scene in my mind and i think that is what a good writer should do. It was a good read. Keep it up, Denis.

By: Brendah

Brendah — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 08:46:00 +0000

I love the story. I could visualize the whole scene in my mind and i think that is what a good writer should do. It was a good read. Keep it up, Denis.

By: Rebecca

Rebecca — Wed, 19 Aug 2009 16:24:33 +0000

I love this story, I love Nafula. The story is so hilarious that you only notice the mistakes on the second read. As far as entertaining the reader is concerned, youve done a good job.
I think the simple language used is quite effective in portrayng the simple lives of the Wafulas.
Thanks for this runny nose I’m having from laughing. Keep writing.

By: Rebecca

Rebecca — Wed, 19 Aug 2009 16:24:00 +0000

By: Mildred Major

Mildred Major — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 10:37:20 +0000

Wow this story though short is really captivating, kept me glued to the screen! Well done Denis, your imagination is astounding, keep it up and give us more like this.

By: Mildred Major

Mildred Major — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 10:37:00 +0000

Wow this story though short is really captivating, kept me glued to the screen! Well done Denis, your imagination is astounding, keep it up and give us more like this.